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同学们大家好，下面教大家如何在雅思写作的图表作文中写出长句子。一共分为7个步骤，详情如下：

　　一、大家先写出一个简单句，只有主谓结构，即Basic Fact ( subject + verb )

　　The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased.

　　二、添加数词Numbers

　　The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased from 5 million to 15 million.

　　三、什么时间?When?

　　The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased from 5 million to 15 million between 1985 and 1995.

　　四、数字是准确的吗?Exactly this number?

　　The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased from just under 5 million to around 15 million between 1985 and 1995.

　　五、添加一个副词Add an adverb

　　The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased dramatically from just under 5 million to around 15 million between 1985 and 1995.

　　六、以名词结构复述Rephrase with a noun

　　The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased dramatically from just under 5 million to around 15 million between 1985 and 1995, a rise of about 10 million in 10 years.

　　现在我们有了一个33个单词的漂亮的长句子~NOW WE HAVE A 33 WORDS, GOOD LONG SENTENCE~

　　七、现在我们尝试以名词开头来重写这个句子。Can we begin with a noun?

　　The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased dramatically from just under 5 million to around 15 million between 1985 and 1995, a rise of about 10 million in 10 years.

　　改写成：

　　There was a dramatic increase in the number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad from just under 5 million to around 15 million between 1985 and 1995, a rise of about 10 million in 10 years.

　　现在已经37个单词啦!37 words now!我不建议写得更长了，it’s a nice long sentence~

　　总结：

　　写长句子时常用的7个步骤Here are the 7 steps we used：

　　1. Basic Fact

　　2. Number

　　3. When?

　　4. Exactly this number?

　　5. Add an adverb

　　6. Rephrase with a noun

　　7. Can we begin with a noun?